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ryter89
i wrote this one morning in february

why do you love her
and leave me astray?
is it because of her writing
because of her looks
because of the way she writes her great books
is it because of her grades
because of her style
becasue of the way you look when she smiles
is it for her friends
or her closeness to you
or for when you talk and then feel brand new
because of her frustrations
for her tears and her anger
or for how she protects someone in any danger
you love her for something
i know that is true
why do you love her?
i know.....
...............its because i love you
--x who0ps
uhmm.. i didnt get the last part,
but great job ! (;
nightsong
I think the last part is supposed to mean: "You say you love her because you`re scared of loving me." Nice job.

xo, Pauline
rOckThISshYt
QUOTE(PAULiNE_x @ Mar 13 2005, 12:21 AM)
I think the last part is supposed to mean: "You say you love her because you`re scared of loving me." Nice job.

xo, Pauline
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Yeah... I agree with Pauline. It's pretty good. _smile.gif
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