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yo brooklyn holla back
holla back yo yo yo
im feelin the flow
while i puttin on a show here yo
heads to my toe im straight up
i never cross da line, cuz i still shine
i drink coke and wine
even though im drunk, i still get crunk
your just a little titanic shit that just sunk
i say it to the world on my microphone
when i finish spittin to you
hope u dont regret when you die
cuz my life is just bout rappin
and ur life is just about wrappin gifts at macy's
and everyday you cry
cuz you have no cash or food
and i hang around good in ma rich neighborhood
i dont care if you bitch or whine
im gonna f**k u up and you'll be mine
my girl is asian, and u got something to say?
i have an occasion to rap
and when it finally turns out to an invasion
ill be aheaded of eminem's 8 mile freestyles
my girl looks like halle berry his looks like rick barry
yoyo check it out
when i investigated ur rap labels
they sucked more than abel
your gayer than adam and eve
matter of fact you have a vagina
and u f**ked adam and steve
watch yo self
HongKongDong
Jason wtf did I tell you? Just stop... man that must of been one of the worst rap's Ive ever read or heard in my whole entire life.
stephinika
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hahaha laugh.gif ahh that made me laugh...






would you look at that...6000 posts. rolleyes.gif
azn_r4pf4n
QUOTE(Funky Buddha @ Mar 6 2005, 4:37 PM)
Jason wtf did I tell you? Just stop... man that must of been one of the worst rap's Ive ever read or heard in my whole entire life.
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agreed. he stole the asian and occasion rhyme from chingy. hey jason, remember balla baby?

plus, ur pic looks like this one popular kid's little brother in my school, and he's hecka nicer than this.


not being mean, but if i was a producer, i wouldn't even want u as a rapper.
d0nchikit0
Stick to making people laugh with your rhymes, that's how it worked on me lol I just laughed.. WITH YOU of course.
--{Empty}--
Uhm... Ok.... *and stops reading all rap parts*
jennyjenny
I have too much time on my hands:

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yo brooklyn holla back
holla back yo yo yo
im feelin the flow
while i puttin on a show here yo

You used the word "yo" too much, dude... are u even from brooklyn? I can picture u getting jumped laugh.gif
QUOTE
heads to my toe im straight up
i never cross da line, cuz i still shine
i drink coke and wine
even though im drunk, i still get crunk

You drink coke and wine? you don't get drunk from wine, and YOU'RE ONLY 12.
QUOTE
your just a little titanic shit that just sunk
i say it to the world on my microphone
when i finish spittin to you
hope u dont regret when you die
cuz my life is just bout rappin
and ur life is just about wrappin gifts at macy's
and everyday you cry
cuz you have no cash or food
and i hang around good in ma rich neighborhood

Rich neighborhood? Is this supposed to rythme? Because I thought that raps were supposed to rythme.
QUOTE
i dont care if you bitch or whine
im gonna f**k u up and you'll be mine
my girl is asian, and u got something to say?
i have an occasion to rap
and when it finally turns out to an invasion
ill be aheaded of eminem's 8 mile freestyles
my girl looks like halle berry his looks like rick barry

You have a girl? I feel bad for her.
QUOTE
yoyo check it out
when i investigated ur rap labels
they sucked more than abel
your gayer than adam and eve

yo yo? gayer than adam and eve? since when were adam and eve "gay"? And it's 'you're'.
QUOTE
matter of fact you have a vagina
and u f**ked adam and steve
watch yo self

Yes, I do have a vagina. Who's adam and steve? Ok???


YOUR "RAPS" ARE HORRIBLE.
mzkandi
oh my gosh that was wack, but thanks for giving me a good laugh
KELLYYY
Stop it, just stop it. Dude, you suck at rapping. Just stop.
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