You callin me a racist boy
here's a reminda
why does 50 say the n word if he black u whore
i know he aint wack but he still tight more
im a korean and i aint actin black
i just like gangsta rap so shut up and watch yo back
u bunch of faggots
say i cant rap
well at least i dont talk like a jap
konichiwa, imma a hunt u downnnn
dont stare at me cuz u look like a lil inncent clownnn
im rich as hell 5000 cash fallin down when it rings da bell
u have no life collectin ja rule cd's and u about to sell
dont get cocky dont get worried cuz i wont tell
u cant rap fo yo life and i mean it kid
my lines are hot and i know you've seen it kid
ur so stupid dat u cant rhyme
1 line i read from ur sh*tty rap is a waste of ma time
that he had to get words from rhymezone dot com
u should quit rap cuz ur mama's ashamed of you
u have no job and all u do is work at a chinese fung choo take out
and all u earn is a buck an hour
that aint no gangsta power
my crib is big, my kicks are rich
dont act like a b*tch

Now I would like to know... WTF was that?!

Now I don't think that your gonna undestand what im sayin.
With raps like that your gonna hit your knees quicker then a priest, when hes prayin.
Your the poster child for birth control pill
Man, your shit goes down quicker then a ho, for a five dollar bill

Lol, don't worry about it "bitch" I suck too

what the ??

okay, stop with the raps jason. leave the situation the way it is or it will get worser. we already got racist accusations on the debate fourms.

Since appearantly this is targeted at the people who put you down on your previous rap, I'm going to post again. Truthfully, I think this rap is worse than your first. It has even more hostility when there really is no need for hostility. Being overly defensive about your "rap" could mean a lot of things like insecurity or low self-esteem or whatever, but the truth is you need to admit that you're lines not "hot". That's the only way you'll improve. You can't discriminate the whole population of people who like Ja Rule (I have one of his CD's ). I think you're the one who needs to be giving people respect. Just in this one "rap" you've called someone a whore, a faggot, and insulted them in several other ways.



Don't say, "the n word", that's just plain stupid. Period.



At least I don't talk like a jap? What the hell is that supposed to mean!? Who's being racist? Whoever that's calling you racist is right!

Alright, I'ma just calm down now. I don't know what to say after reading this. Whether I should continue supporting your interest or if I should tell you... You do not want to tell this to the public! They will not be happy! You think your lines are hot? Insulting your readers/listeners is a not. Even if it's impersonal.

...
AND RHYMEZONE IS COOL!

i think that people should rap about their experiences in life.. you obviously dont.... stop being a poseur please...

*sigh*

if yuor not acting black...whyd u just make a rap?

Agreed.

please....just stop.

lmfao! I love that. It is actually damn good. And... Not only that... At least you're speaking the god damn truth rather than some stupid ass bull sh!t that this moron is writing. All he does is talk dirt on people when he doesn't realize that he's being trashed. (But, you have got to admit, that sh!t is HILAROUS! [except when it offends people ])

check yourself
before you rep yourself

Why did I waste the last 2 mins of my life reading that?
Yeah, I don't really think this rap makes a point whatsoever instead of disolving the problem your making it worse, just drop the stupid racist bs, eventually everyone is gonna have to realize everyone is different and thats what makes life awesome, who knows like in 50 yrs everyone is gonna be a mix of everything.....

u cant ryhme kid with kid

just..no

bad rhymes, and the rhythm is all over the place

i read the first 5 lines or so and my eyes grew sore...

Uhmm.... what was that? Yeah, I don't know anything about rap, so I'm not gonna say anything.

*yawn*

*sigh* It's almost as if he's talking to himself.

"ur so stupid dat u cant rhyme"
Anyone can rhyme.

"1 line i read from ur sh*tty rap is a waste of ma time"
One line that I read from your poopy rap is a waste of MY time.

"that he had to get words from rhymezone dot com"
I bet you got your rhymes there. I bet most of us don't even know what that is. lol

"u should quit rap cuz ur mama's ashamed of you"
I'll use you as a reason to dislike rap.

"u have no job and all u do is work at a chinese fung choo take out and all u earn is a buck an hour"
Stereotypical.

"that aint no gangsta power"
Wanksturr.

"my crib is big, my kicks are rich
dont act like a b*tch"

this piece of work is hilarious. i just laughed and laughed at all the idiotic verses.

"u have no job and all u do is work at a chinese fung choo take out
and all u earn is a buck an hour"

for one thing, if you have no job, then how come you're working at a chinese restaurant?

Mayne, what tha hell wuz dat? LMao.

WTF??
the jap part really pisses me off...
you should shut up and watch your back..not us..
and the job and chinese food job doesnt make sense..
how can u not have a job but still work at a chinese restraunt?
really..i just wasted 4 minutes of my life reading ur so called "rap"

i know people who freestyle/ rap, and they are actually good. they have a message across their rap, not just the theme of "i rock." c'mon, what was the point of that.. also your rhyming skills are a bit on the weak side; like, "black and back?" and i dont get it, if you aren't racist then why are you saying "atleast i dont talk like a jap?" you're so rich? who cares? =/ that was really bad. . .

he speakin' truth. japs have no honor. all the honor they did have was lost in the 40's. ja rule is whack as hell.
yeah dude you need some work.
the rest of you honkies need to shut the hell up when he speakin. cuz y'all aint even real.

Leave the rapping to Blacks and people with talent like me *COUGH.* Honestly those rhymes were shit, "Your a waste of ma time." Your incorrect you wasted MY time.

If your rich, why don't you have a record out. If your rich couldn't you afford to buy GOOD rhymes?

....
Terrible terrible shit.
Even the people don't like rap just made their dislike for rap even sink lower.
ANd the people who do like rap like me, well you fueled a fire to kick your ass. Chink

Jason , dont be afraid of people jumping u now , now that you posted this . You Should come to New York if all works out well ....see if the people are interested in you *

im assuming that u r japanese or u know every japanese person in the world and can speak from experience..b/c the last time i checked i was japanese and didnt know u..

ohh that hurt a little =\




hmm well the people who rap arent all black...

What in the world? You should just stop. That was a waste of my time too.

Please stop writing senseless raps that are aimed at people who put you down for being racist or something.

Thank you. It's very rude and extremely pointless at the same time. At least if you are going to write a rap, make it about something better, will you.

Scratch that. Just stop making raps.

Umm.. If this is so horrible, can you please stop posting and bumping it back up to the top? As you can see, this topic was created March 5th and now it's already May, so just let it go -_-; This is my last post here. I'm not helping Jason get more (negative) popularity.