She’s living, dying proof
I am a slave to this feeling
This ecstasy
This forbidden art no one can master
My heart and mind lay in her palm
Her fist clenched tight
I want them back
I need them back right now
All the sweat
I wish I’d never shed
Will drip a hole into my forehead
In this hell that she and I erected
Why did I let my guard down?
You expected anything less than mixed feelings?
I hate you, you selfish, maleficent jezebel
Drown in your morbid liquor of my tears
Liquor of my tears
I melted for you
With your frozen heart
Glimpses of your smile were a treasure
All but not, forever buried, in the sands of your apathy
I was a rose that sawed off my thorns
You made me dry up and be gone with the wind
After you stomped on and spat on my dry pedals

oh i thought you changed style to sound like snoop dog.. i as like NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

GJ... its a long time since ive heard some one say jezebel

^ hahaha. i should definetly write a rap. hehe

^ i think ive said that to you before... and you where like

"no...just no"

lol interesting title...but yeah, i liked it. great emotions. lovely vocabulary too.

agreed. the vocabulary is profound.

Wow, that was very, very good.

Word Choice - 100%.

Good job. I love the way it flows.

*Cough* NICE SIGNATURE. Hehe. Nice poem, too.

hey kathleen, i think your really really hot cuzi sw your pic in your profile

^wtf? haha

very nice, like always. your poetry is always filled with emotion. I love it