alli
Mar 2 2005, 04:00 PM
yah so ive never posted on this writing section b4..but i wrote like a short quote..and i wanted to see if you guys like it..so here it is!
sometimes i feel like my lifes a novel. sometimes a fairytale, a mystery, or a story with a twisted ending. But no matter what, the story goes on and eventually it comes to an end. even if you dont want it to.
its kinda short..and i think i need to fix it up a lil.but just tell me if you like it
rOckThISshYt
Mar 2 2005, 07:28 PM
I think the quote is true and I liked it, but I believe there are better ways for you to word it. I love writing quotes. I have a whole bunch of them.
But it's not too short. I would actually make it shorter. I duno.. I just like short but good quotes.
rockstermonkey
Mar 2 2005, 10:13 PM
I do like the message, but I think that it could be better put. I agree with ^, I think that it could have been shorter and more powerful.
korbana05
Mar 2 2005, 11:41 PM
>.< I like it!! *claps*
-- you could make it a bit shorter though... maybe like:
"Life is like a novel. Regardless of how it ends... the story will go on and eventually come to an end; even if you dont want it to."
its really similar, but a bit shorter... although yours adds more detail. ah well... im just blabbing... well good job!!

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Mar 2 2005, 11:58 PM
Haha, I wish I could come up with a quote. I like yours, very true on the perspective of life, kind of a depressing thought but true nevertheless, keep coming up with quotes though. You can reach so many people with so few words
stephinika
Mar 3 2005, 12:00 AM
wow...i really like it. great comparison, and its so true. lovely.
salcha
Mar 4 2005, 03:22 AM
wow, that is true.
but true love never has an ending..
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