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alli
yah so ive never posted on this writing section b4..but i wrote like a short quote..and i wanted to see if you guys like it..so here it is!

sometimes i feel like my lifes a novel. sometimes a fairytale, a mystery, or a story with a twisted ending. But no matter what, the story goes on and eventually it comes to an end. even if you dont want it to.

its kinda short..and i think i need to fix it up a lil.but just tell me if you like it
rOckThISshYt
I think the quote is true and I liked it, but I believe there are better ways for you to word it. I love writing quotes. I have a whole bunch of them.

But it's not too short. I would actually make it shorter. I duno.. I just like short but good quotes.
rockstermonkey
I do like the message, but I think that it could be better put. I agree with ^, I think that it could have been shorter and more powerful.
korbana05
>.< I like it!! *claps*

-- you could make it a bit shorter though... maybe like:

"Life is like a novel. Regardless of how it ends... the story will go on and eventually come to an end; even if you dont want it to."

its really similar, but a bit shorter... although yours adds more detail. ah well... im just blabbing... well good job!! happy.gif --
--{Empty}--
Haha, I wish I could come up with a quote. I like yours, very true on the perspective of life, kind of a depressing thought but true nevertheless, keep coming up with quotes though. You can reach so many people with so few words _smile.gif
stephinika
wow...i really like it. great comparison, and its so true. lovely. flowers.gif
salcha
wow, that is true.
but true love never has an ending..
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