People see me, people care,
Yet they try to avoid my stare.
My family trys,
yet not hard enough.
They push and push me but,
towards what?
I don't have a future
and don't need one now.
My fate is chosen,
I don't know how.
All I know is
what I've been told.
That my soul
has been taken and sold.
People see me, people stare.
What they don't know is
that I have to care...

hmmm i like it i think its good man goood stuff XD

Woah. I really really like that. Its simple..but I dont know why I like it so much. Great job!

Yeah.. What she said. ^^ lol.

i like it. simple, but has a good point.

I like the idea and thought you brought out in that piece, the simplicity makes it easy to understand what you're trying to say along with easily used to relate to the issues in each other person's life. That's the main reason in which I like your piece.

Thanks fro replying, im glad you all enjoyed this. I really appreciate the feed back :)

I wub You all!!

10/10 .. i think that's me because no one doesnt knoe me well enough, they think they know what i do, and get the wrong idea from their viewpoint. Yea, people do stare at me constantly .. like i do ..

I'm Sorry You feel that way, but you aren't alone. If you ever wanna chat Im here!
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