So..I dont know if its a poem or not. I just wrote it in class because it was the only way to keep me from screaming.



I keep smiling even when
I'm screaming inside
Because these things drive me crazy
I have no choice but to hide
Force a smile
And blink away the tears
Im supposed to be strong
Supposed to have no fears
But I'm finding it so hard
Not to frown
Im such a strong person
Why am I breaking down?
But you know Im alright
You know Im just the kind of girl
That feels so hurt and smiles
Though ever collapsing is my world
I don't do escuses
I don't ask why
Its just a breakdown
It happens all the time
Don't yell in my face
Don't EVEN try
You wanna help me?
Just let me cry
Yeah I love you all my life
But you don't even know
A thing I feel inside
Know by the
Look in my eye
Please....even if its a lie
To keep these tears from being cried..
Tell me I'm fine

I loved that. I love the emotion. You made it real easy to see through your eyes.

i loved it. sounds exactly like something i'd say or something...very well done.

*applause* i feel that ALL the time (the feeling like breaking down and having the want of others to just leave you alone and yet sometimes you kinda want them there... and you just want things to be alright)... yah. And how you put it... no other words could be said truer than those... good job!

Eek! Thanks. ^_^

That's extremely powerful. I really liked that one. There was a lot said in such a short period of time, very well done. Quite enjoyed it and it's very easy to relate to from many many perspectives. Keep it up

wow girl that such an awesome poem!!!

It's just weird that you just happened to be ispired to write a poem with the EXACT same words as an ashlee simpson song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and post on a forum and call it your own. BAAHAHAHA

dumb bitch, if i was gonna scab someone else's material and claim it as my own it would at least be better shit than ashlee simpson.

^I dont see how the relationship between the song&the poem.

WOW; So many people can relate to this. Nicely done