123Shot
Feb 28 2005, 10:58 PM
Yay poetry I luv poetry anyway here is my poem.
THE PERFECT GIRL
When I see you,
you make my day.
When I talk to you,
you cheer me up in every way.
When we hold hands,
you make me love you even more.
When you hug me,
you make my love for you soar.
When you kiss me,
you fill my heart with joy.
For all these reasons,
I am luckiest to be your boy.
kokosofly
Feb 28 2005, 11:25 PM
Aw that's sweet!
Wish someone would write something like that to me lol
rOckThISshYt
Feb 28 2005, 11:46 PM
Awww... I think that's so sweet. Most guys aren't man enough to write poetry. I think only the real men are those who show emotion and aren't afraid to express themselves. Great job!
123Shot
Mar 1 2005, 12:24 AM
Ty all! Ya I like writing poetry...some of the guys at my school think its stupid but naw poetry aint stupid...
stephinika
Mar 2 2005, 03:12 PM
cute. a bit cliche, but it is sweet.