enchantment
bewitchment
and trickment
or treatment

for the sickness
and the weakness
and the selfless
and the crying

those who know us
say we're lost as
we've no homes
but we know that

we live on the wind

I really like it. It really focuses on the change in life (at least I think so). Nice job!

kind of simple but i like it, especially the beginning. keep it up.

Yes..tis simple. But I like it. I didn't know you wrote..but then agian..I haven't been here in a while >.<

Hm, I like your ending, and the verses are put together well, I too don't get what you're trying to get at but maybe this was one of those spur of the moment pieces, tell me if I'm wrong but haha but it's good nonetheless

its about feeling lost, but people trying to cure you when they dont really know.care what's actually wrong.

If all you had said was that I would still have been left with a smile.

*Gasps! So simple. Yet so true. I like it muchly.