REFLECTION


tension is building
it seethes and contracts
it's a tease and come back
what a strange melody
left on the wrinkled lobe

just a drunken vision
just a drunken vision

which deciduous division
such malicious disposition
it tends to hobble in and out
it tends to hobble in and out

drifting from sleep to rage
and back again

hairless and without dreams
devoid theyre escaping

this fighting of illusive pain
twisting vortex down the drain
its all falling out gone sane

which way snaps back to reality
falling back to reenact the fantasy
tilting on the veins of mentality

just a drunken vision
just a drunken vision

which strain is most potent
which vein licks precision

can it be the utterly delicious
the shot of calamity
keep the meter running fastening

the haste in pace of the reled race can find a chance place around my taste, the most irritable face is within the grasp of my eyes. broken lies and indifferent size. bitter allies can devise a wroughtful device built to divide.

just a drunken vision

seeking external enlightenment
outside the linin'
cancelled for rain
the window frame
delivers a tear
of dry chase
the earth raped of her breadth
wisps of jubilant rays stretch
a wickedly righteous wretch

just a drunken vision
just a drunken vision

suicidal leaves
falling to the grassy creeds
what pleasant lack of seeds
manifesting flames

its kindling the inferno
its growing eternal
which pavement burial
dug up the stench of mundo world
plasmatic reactin like automatic ranges
its stages are blackened what happened
to the beginning

just a drunken vision
just a drunken vision

pandering to the drowned
delivering past tents of anchored rain
monsoon of blood transfers through
what has been done to you?
do unto brothers what has taken to the blue
swollen in fear, tension releases asunder
no wonder the thunder stops and we're
a lump away from a tear

just a drunken vision
whats it stuckin pigeon
twisted on the lines
jolting light from beneath its loins
its lost its points
and bestiary coins
leads me to my next dubitable line
deep inside my ever grinding mind
beneath the plight
deeper than light
farther than reaching
steeper than right
bleaching the sight
what can happen tonight
of all nights it seems
so calm in an ever lessening dream

wow. thats awesome. i love your vocabulary.

I really love it. I esp. like the repitition of "just a drunken vision". Nice job. It is really just..amazing.

All I can say is.... wow... Damn, that's amazing. I love your vocabulary and I can almost feel what you felt. You did a wonderful job at expressing yourself. That's what poetry's all about.

thanx

very nice