..A
D R
N O
..U

again
circles
seesaw
we saw
the future
in the butterfliy's wing
crushed in the grill of the car

V
ER
IFY

me
be
james
playing games
with the life
we have come to resent

LI
EV

or
evil
together
as one
you cant escape it
we doom ourselves

I

S

O

L

A

T

E

D

by
obsession
choice
nothing left to give
we inherit
a wasteland we wathced you destroy

verry cool. i had to reread it a couple times to understand it tho. good job=]

I like it. Very fresh. Took me a few seconds to get the "around" though...

oooh! I get it! awsome!

that is so awesome. i love the way you write.

erhh i dont get it

im kinda slow

I definatly like it. Good job.

Haha, very inovative, I like the picture I get from it, althought it may not exactly be the one you intend it to be, but it works for me, well written.

so so, nothing special. nice innovation of the normal working shape though.

hmm nice