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RiddleMeWonders
You never knew I loved you
You never knew at all
You never knew I saw you
As you continued to love the wrong
You never knew I wished for you
the happiness I'd never have
You never knew I kissed your memory
As I lay down in my bed
No; You never knew I loved you.

We set the patterns unknowingly
For the way we express our feelings
the thoughts of actions and dealings
Contemplating whether to take or leave
The redeeming lilly
We set the patterns unknowingly

I never told you how I loved you.
I never considered the cost of not doing so
I never showed you my heart for fear of the breaking
This would be my worst mistake making
I never tried to jump after love
Instead I watched you fall and rise slowly
I never told you how I loved you.
Kathleen
Aww that was good. That's exactly how I feel towards someone in the situation I've put myself in. blink.gif
sweetdreamsx3
Whoa....great writer. That's the same in something I Have with this guy recently, except I don't love him yet..
stephinika
lovely. easy to relate to too. great job. happy.gif
Sa-Chan
I read this...and I did something about my life. Thank you, sincerely. You have no idea to the depths this touched me. Your poetry is beautiful, and in that your soul is beautiful. Never stop writing.
smthngcrprategrl34
that's good. i read it and i relate to it. and it pointed out to me all the things that i didn't do that i should have that i can't fix now. i agree with Sa-Chan. don't stop writing!
rOckThISshYt
wonderful....
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Hurrrmmm... I like _smile.gif cause its very clear, and straight forward. Good job Keep it up. Looking fwd to readin more
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