it's the homework for final term. in thailand, i think the 12 years old girl is not good in english plz help me!

about this homework,
teacher give me a topic
it's 'place call home'

it's the same 'article'
you can help me about 'more sentences'
[i want about 15 sentences]

a place call home in my opinion is the place for stay, eat, play and meet members in my family to talk with them. The place i call home have 2 storied, have 3 bedrooms, large livingroon, dining roon, kitchen, and bathroom i often to stay in my roon it has a television, computer, radio, and desk for do my homework. it does not have any bedroom, i think, this room is the roon for eating playing doing my homework and all the i can.

can you help me about 'more' sentences
and pls fix my grammar

Thanks you !

think about the emotional and intangible aspects

a place call home in my opinion is a place for stay, eat, play and get to know my family to talk better. The place i call home has 2 storied, 3 bedrooms, large livingroon, dining roon, kitchen, and bathroom i usually stay in my roon it has a television, computer, radio, and desk to do my homework. it does not have any bedroom, i think, this room is the roon for eating playing doing my homework and all the i can.


whoa, that's some bad grammer. well glad a chinese canadian boy is here to help ya =)
i bold your mistakes. it's generally okay. the last sentence i bolded. it's not wrong, but i don't get what you trying to say,

oh, thank you so muchhhh.
i will post new sentences that i think soon :)