the feeling of emptiness is all you can bear
each night is a different kind which leaves one in despair
that one step before the final break down is the hardest part
cause once u've left that empty part of you inside it gets filled with all the things u could think of
Emptiness and sorrow is all you can feel
For those lonely nights sitting in your room
rushing through the broken and heart filled poems
that one name comes to mind
he makes you feel sorrow.. and emptiness at the same time

my friend(whom i like ) said something about having an empty feeling, and i came out with this. to me its an Okay poem, what about you guys?

wow i just feel like blurting everything out to him.. ha now im rambling. go on with ur comments if u wish

i like the words you used. it seems to be heartfelt. nice writing.

i like it .. i like it a lot!

i like it too... i can relate, which is always good

I really like that part..

Keep up the great work.

thanks guys =)