opening my eyes , watching the world pass me by
im walking the path of a lonesome road
leaving all my memories and my past behind
starting over of a new life ive never had

taken a journey to cure this heart of stone
to be filled with the love and gentleness of ones touch
to be purified for someone i can love so much
but for now i walk this path all alone

learning the patience it takes to reach a goal
the happiness i can recieve without giving a fake smile
it may take long it can take awhile
this will be the first time of reliefment on my soul

but for now i walk a path all alone
no one here but just me on my own

It's pretty good. Similiar to Shakespeare sonnet style.. Did you write it after you read my sonnets? ;D

I like the emotions in it.. kindof reminds me of Green Day's "Boulevard of Broken Dreams"

nice...i really like the last two lines.