all those worthless apparitions
they will leave you oh so numb
they will fake you they will stab you, break you
and you will succumb
to their awkward and dark appeal
so mysterious and unreal
do not listen do not hear
they will trap you using fear
no one ready no one set
to try and save you from your debt
fear them now, these apparitions
fear them now, for they will soon
crack your mind and make you feel
like you have some deftly tune
to your eyes and your ears
that's all they're willing to hear

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I just wrote it, but I can't find a clear definition of what it means to me.
I just started typing and I came up with this.
Define, please

I think you're bisexual

HAHA, of course you do, but that doesn't explain what I just wrote.

Well, Steve. It explains a lot

haha

hahaha, Okay...

but really, I'm straight, so don't assume anything

Oh, I ain't assuming

Intriguing. Since you want it defined - it seems you fall to your own demons, to put it simply. For some reason, the line "like you have some deftly tune" seems out of place to me. You should post what you write more often, Hezron. I like it.

I feel the cycle begins in the deftly tunes. They have the effect of a personal mantra that is deceitful, untruthful and self-degrading. The imagery that is associated with this "slick talk" creates a vivid pseudo-reality that becomes all-consuming. It steals your life-force and begins to overpower your spirit (leave you oh so numb). When the "slick talk" cycle has been repeated long enough, it becomes personified in the form of an apparition or ghost. What was once a deftly tune (possibly representative of an unresolved personal issue), has been validated to the point of psychosis (crack your mind). The cycle is completed and fully self-aware at the point of (that's all they're willing to hear).

This is powerful and well-written. Please share more!

That's some deep stuff you have your self. I don't like that AngelicEyez00 person called you "homo". They must just not be a very poetic person or a deep thinker. People say stuff like that all the time to me it's just because they don't get that stuff.

^ Uh, I believe she called him bisexual, not homosexual. There's a difference and if you didn't know that I think it's you who doesn't get a lot of stuff.

Anyway, I do this a lot my self. Just get a pen and paper and start writing whatever comes into your head. It helps out with problems and such. Great job! I liked it.

I remember writing this. This was when I was an overemotional bitch. I miss those days.