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The bells will stop their chiming
The birds won’t sing their bittersweet songs
The rain won’t fall, the sun won’t shine
All my letters will be ‘returned to sender’
There will be no music to meet my ears, my heart
Our imperfections will be visible, naked
Now that you’re gone, laughter and cheer are things of the past
And the present is looking grim, oppressive
Now that you’re gone

what the heck, I don't know what I'm doing ermm.gif
stephinika
short, sweet, simple and to the point. i love it. especially this part:

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There will be no music to meet my ears, my heart
Our imperfections will be visible, naked
sporadic
I thought it was good, only I don't find bird's songs to be bittersweet.
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whew, I was worried that you guys were going to trash it. thank you for your comments
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