It's an idiotic situation
And your an idiot on your own
You won't listen to a word I say
Rejected the facts I've shown

And she isn't right for you
Trust me, it is true
I've told you many times before
But all I want to see
Is you being happy
Even though you deserve much more

It's a repulsive matter
And she's repulsive all the time
Not as innocent as she seems
She is completely guilty of her crime

And she isn't right for you
Trust me, it is true
I've told you many times before
But all I want to see
Is you being happy
Even though you deserve much more

Its an idiotic situation
Impossible to make an implementation
A completely repulsive matter
Reality waiting for the disaster

And she isn't right for you
Trust me, it is true
I've told you many times before
But all I want to see
Is you being happy
Even though you deserve much more

Comments and constructive criticism wanted and needed. ^^

This is sweet. I really like it...It makes me sad, though. I know what it's like...

the rhyming is quite nice; it doesn't seem obviously thought out (which is good).
one thing that really bugs me when it comes to writing is the you're/your thing...but that's minor. i liked the line but the entire thing is really good.
nice work!

Oh, I never really noticed that. I'll change it when I get the time. And thanks you guys.

aww its really good. i loved the whole thing :]

Thank you

very nicely written. i like it. keep up the good work

//edit// ahh double post...my bad.

Aw. I really like it. Good job =]]

i've lived through that many a times. i like it!

i'd change "Impossible to make an implementation" to somthing like " the impossibilty of implememtation".