xtransatlanticismx
Jan 28 2005, 07:44 PM
scared
there is a scared little girl
under there,
under the makeup and the stiletto heels
and the miniskirt
swaying to the beat
among a mass of bodies sweat and sex
under that there is a girl
scared to death of how long it will be
until someone figures her out for
that person she doesn't want to be.
Wishful_Dream
Jan 30 2005, 12:12 AM
all your poems are terrific. I love them. =)
smthngcrprategrl34
Jan 30 2005, 12:57 PM
props!
stephinika
Jan 30 2005, 08:16 PM
very nice. i love the concept.
Looow
Jan 30 2005, 08:34 PM
Very nice.
Looow
Jan 30 2005, 08:34 PM
i really like it. Nice job
sporadic
Jan 30 2005, 08:59 PM
that was pretty good. I don't really have any criticisms, but I thought that was a pretty good poem.
Sa-Chan
Jan 31 2005, 08:52 PM
It was really good. I wish it was longer so I could read more.
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