a more motivational version of "the RX testemate"

FORCE OF WILL
Are you people or cattle in the herd?
Are you chimps in laboratories or something more?
You have the force of will on your side
And with it you can do anything

Ask me how I’m scaling mountains
While you’re still tripping over molehills
Ask me how I stay so positive
While you’re still popping pills
Tell me that I’m strong
But I’m a person just like you
I can make the best of things
And I’m sure that you can, too

You are the most powerful thing you know
The only problem is you won’t let it show
The entire universe is on your shoulders, but you can still
Take care of things with your force of will

Ask me how I walk a mile
While you’re still tying your shoes
Ask me how I’m tickled pink
While you’re still singing the blues
Cause I don’t rely on chemicals
I force myself to cope
Ourselves and our friends is all we need
Life’s too short to constantly mope

You are the most powerful thing you know
The only problem is you won’t let it show
The entire universe is on your shoulders, but you can still
Take care of things with your force of will

I like the last stanza. *Still wishes she had your talent*

Haha, same here...That's basically what I was going to say. :P

[steals some talent] >:|

Excellent job as always. :D

sounds great. i love your style of writing.

its great but the pattern of rhyming confuses me...

Dang. I really really like that.

I looked at it as directed towards me, and I still don't understand how you stay so positive.

Hmm. I like this, and your right. It is more motivational than "The RX Testemate".



Those were my favorite lines. Out of the two pieces: RX Testemate and Force of Will....I think I like RX Testemate better, just because it seems more direct, and not as motivational. I don't know if that makes in sense. Heh.

Keep on writing always.