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ryfitaDF
2:10 a.m.
And I couldn't get you off my mind
I beckon for sleep
I will if you ever let me
Invading my dreams
I am your willing captor
The sorrow of your absence
I need you more than I thought

What won’t I do for you?
I swear I’ll wait
Through hell, high water,
Damnation and a day
I’ll battle the elements
The apocalyptic storms
For you there’s nothing I won’t do
Just to feel your warmth in my arms.

Tonight I lay
Longing to just talk to you
Your picture clenched in my hand
Missing you till days anew
I seek relief
Your smile shining in my vision
The sorrow in your absence
I need you more than I thought

What won’t I do for you?
I swear I’ll wait
Through hell, high water,
Damnation and a day
I’ll battle the elements
The apocalyptic storms
For you there’s nothing I won’t do
Just to feel your warmth in my arms.

I believe this is yours
I found it beating in my chest
Put it where it belongs
Hanging from your necklace
3:10 a.m.
Wait for your smile shining through
I need you more than I thought
I need you and
I love you

What won’t I do for you?
I swear I’ll wait
Through hell, high water,
Damnation and a day
I’ll battle the elements
The apocalyptic storms
For you there’s nothing I won’t do
Just to feel your warmth in my arms.

If I knew every language in the world
And wrote you a love song with a nonexistent end
It would still come up short of complete
It would still be an understatement

if you can help me think of a name that'd be groovy. <3
nyctophiliac
This completely reflects the last entry I commented on on your LiveJournal. tongue.gif It's awesome, though, as are all of your pieces. _smile.gif

Edit // This is Kathleen. I didn't realize I was logged in on Steph's account still. pinch.gif
stephinika
wow well done. i really like it. happy.gif i quite like the chorus too. title? hmm...sorry i got nothing right now. blink.gif
inthemudhole
AH.
I love this one.

Jeez, you're just on a roll! :P

I'm really feeling this one. I love the chorus.

Just...excellent job. =]
wind&fire
they flow to you ... get lyrical
TreesTurnMeOn
Wow. That was truly amazing. I'm not very good at titles because everytime I make up one, I sound like a retard. ^^

But VERY good job. (you HAVE to tell me who this person is!)
Sa-Chan
This is beautiful...I mean, there's nothing I can say to criticize this. No need for improvements. This is...beautiful, and heart-felt.

For a title...maybe "Damnation and a Day", just because it's a line that repeats frequently and is kind of catchy. It may not really fit as a title to this, however.
ryfitaDF
QUOTE(AzNbUbZ @ Jan 29 2005, 8:27 AM)
they flow to you ... get lyrical
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