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Shattered
By: Savannah Harrison

Love becomes a mirror,
A reflection of your withered soul.
There's nothing there but just a shell,
And your loneliness is metallic...
Cold
Slam a fist into your being,
Fragile, breakable; Like a porcelain doll.
Watch you crumble
Watch you fall.
What you craved has shattered,
So just shatter.
Rain your regret down upon my appearance,
Bleed my tale-tell smile dry,
Tear me apart with your broken glass.
And perhaps our jagged pieces...
Can someday become one.
ryfitaDF
"tale-tell"? isn't it "tell-tale"?

you're improving, no doubt about it. *thumbs up* never give up.
aznxdreamer
i like it.
stephinika
nice. i really like these lines:

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Slam a fist into your being,
Fragile, breakable; Like a porcelain doll.
Wishful_Dream
I really liked it.. =) keep writing =P
xtransatlanticismx
pretty nice, i like it
smthngcrprategrl34
its good
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