ok, im not a very creative person, i just get my moments of creativity and this was one of them. i was in english thinking about my girlfriend and suddenly just started writing and came up with this, o and her name is Tram Anh Bui, in viet u jus sey that last name first..

Without her there is nothing

The cloudy skies have parted,
There’s nothing left to see,
The sun is clear and magnificent,
Yet there’s no one here with me,

I thought that there’d be no one,
How very wrong I was,
For I have found my soul mate,
Her name is Bui Tram Anh.

I love her more than anything,
I’d give my life for her,
Cause without her there is nothing,
No life, no love, no peace.

I hope I never lose her,
Without her there is nothing,
I promise I’ll love her always,
Until the end of our time.

When the mighty sea dries up,
When the bluest skies turn grey,
I’ll still be here standing,
With open arms,
To give her a long lasting hug,
Until my arms grow weak and weary,
I’ll always be there for her and she’ll always be mine.

Without her there is nothing,
Because she’s everything I need.




comments?

aw thats so sweet. nicely done.

yeah really it is.. i wish my bf would write me a poem about the way he felt for me.. instead its an unknown mystery :(

ok are you ready for my comment??

AWWWWWWWWWWW!!! haha, lol yah your girlfriend will LOVE that poem...i especially thought this part was great:

Great job! keep it up!

good man. writing love poems for ur gf: *thumbs up*. she'll love it.

shes gona go crazy when reads that hahah omg great!!

btw if anyone makes any stupid ass remarks about ur poem.. lemme know ill fcking kick their ass!!!!!!!


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