i got this from a friend


i wrote this whole poem of things left unsaid... but then i earased the by accident... first i thought maybe it was sign... but i still have these feelings on my mind...maybe if i was brave we wouldnt be left in this perdicament.. i am weak on my own.. no...no i dont want to be alone....

very cool. sounds lonly..:(

aw i wish i coulda read it =(
feel the same way

.. you did read it. .. the little blurb (second "paragraph) is the piece of writing.

er...try putting it in poetry form? you know..one line and then another line..yeah. other than that, its alright

^^

agreed..

not bad. but i think it would be considered prose, not poetry

first off i told my friend the constructive critiqueing but she never said it was a poem she said she earased the poem