I wrote this in HS(when i was 17 i think) anyways i'm 22 now..so yeah lol its really old


here it is

i havent even edited either i found it a while ago.

You make me wanna
by Marcy

you make me wanna break some glass
you make me wanna punch my fist into
the wall, while i stare and watch it turn
black and blue. you make me wanna say
"f**k you"

you make me wanna start a fight,
kick everyones ass and run and hide
sometimes i hate you, sometimes i
wanna hurt you. but then i realize
how would i feel afterwards,
i will just feel empty inside

without you. i wanna scream.
its as if i need you, want you
its as if you are my every desire
why do you have this spell on me

its like a rush, a rush for love
its like a feeling, i never had before
but then, but then i grow more and more

and then i wanna scream, punch, hit
say your name out loud, i wanna hit
punch say your name out loud. i want the pass
i dont want the future anymore, i wanna go back.

you make me wanna say f**k you.
you make me wanna say i love you.
you make me wanna go crazy......


the end


so yeah thats it lol i know its not that great but its okay i suppose :)

youre 22?!?!

you need to make it flow more...

yeah i am LOL

ooo yeah i'm bad at flowing......erm i'm not that great at writting i just write for whatever ..lol mostly when i'm bored..

i try to ...its a good way to express yourself...

i think its good. awsome job.