a fourth grade writing prompt, rewritten.

my best friend?
never talks back, except when i do,
shouts and screams and cries
when i do, when i want to

my best friend
tells all of my deepest secrets
but only to a spiral bound journal,
where nobody else knows.

my best friend
is artificial
material
replaced often and worn with abuse.

my best friend?
is mechanical, with point five lead.
silver, with a black rubber grip,
and the eraser comes out when you twist the top.

wow that's awesome! lol totally wasn't expecting this part:


lol totally made me smile! great job!

i like it! it has a nice twist at the end!

wow thats great. i really like the last verse too.

thats awsome. good job.

wow..i loved it!!!!!!!! that's a really great ending and all.

awsome job! i love it.

lol thats unexpected. but it's a cool poem =D