dispn0ygonekrazy
Jan 23 2005, 10:33 PM
sitin here all alone while the sadness comes all over me
its been like this all the good times are nothin but a memory
i never thought ill need u cause i never felt like dis before
the first day i felt this is the day when walked out that door
i regret all those times where i made u cry
i regret all those times that i made u wanna die
i regret all those times where i wasnt stayin true
but ill never regret sharin my love with u
i regret those nights where u stayed alone at home
i regret those times where i made u look dumb on the phone
if ever u wanna get back wit me
i promise with all my heart ill always love u honestly
- credit goes to my brother matt an inspirin writer looking for an answer =]
KissMe2408
Jan 24 2005, 06:13 PM
aw very romantic

Nice poem! I especially liked this part:
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i regret all those times where i made u cry
i regret all those times that i made u wanna die
i regret all those times where i wasnt stayin true
but ill never regret sharin my love with u
great job! keep it up
Gypsy Eyes
Jan 24 2005, 08:27 PM
wow nice job. I think it would flow better if you just canned the first part, and just stuck with the i regret lines. nice job!
hannah1019
Jan 24 2005, 08:36 PM
wow its so amazing i am speechless
stephinika
Jan 24 2005, 09:47 PM
sounds pretty good. nice idea/meaning.
xGlovex
Jan 24 2005, 10:16 PM
nice poem. very romantic
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