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dispn0ygonekrazy
sitin here all alone while the sadness comes all over me
its been like this all the good times are nothin but a memory
i never thought ill need u cause i never felt like dis before
the first day i felt this is the day when walked out that door
i regret all those times where i made u cry
i regret all those times that i made u wanna die
i regret all those times where i wasnt stayin true
but ill never regret sharin my love with u
i regret those nights where u stayed alone at home
i regret those times where i made u look dumb on the phone
if ever u wanna get back wit me
i promise with all my heart ill always love u honestly

- credit goes to my brother matt an inspirin writer looking for an answer =]
KissMe2408
aw very romantic happy.gif Nice poem! I especially liked this part:

QUOTE
i regret all those times where i made u cry
i regret all those times that i made u wanna die
i regret all those times where i wasnt stayin true
but ill never regret sharin my love with u


great job! keep it up cool.gif
Gypsy Eyes
wow nice job. I think it would flow better if you just canned the first part, and just stuck with the i regret lines. nice job!
hannah1019
wow its so amazing i am speechless
stephinika
sounds pretty good. nice idea/meaning.
xGlovex
nice poem. very romantic happy.gif
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