SystemDamaged
Jan 21 2005, 12:27 PM
If anyone's ever seen Johnny Depp's movie "The Atronaut's Wife", you would know who they are in this layout

It's called My Blushing Bride because the whole layout is inspired by the song "Possum Kingdom" by The Toadies, and theres a part of the song where he says "My Blushing Bride~" *nod* So yea, what do you think?
http://www.xanga.com/systemdamaged--EDIT>>
Oh crud, I messed up the title. It should be BLUSHING, not BLUSHFUL
avalon*
Jan 21 2005, 12:36 PM
the text is too dark..and the image is a bit dark. just lighten things up a little bit and it'll be awesome =)
SystemDamaged
Jan 21 2005, 12:56 PM
There, I used the screen effect and lightened everything up a bit. How's that?
avalon*
Jan 21 2005, 12:59 PM
MUCH better =) i love the image!
the text is still a little hard to read, but it's a little better =)
hi-C
Jan 21 2005, 01:15 PM
Make your text a pale yellow or white. Then it'll be fantastic.
SystemDamaged
Jan 21 2005, 01:22 PM
Made the text a pale yellow, looks kinda funky, but I guess it' looks alright
avalon*
Jan 21 2005, 01:37 PM
now it's much easier to read. if you don't like yellow i suppose you could use a light beige so it'd match with your layout a little more. once you're done using the layout, submit it! i like it =)
SystemDamaged
Jan 21 2005, 01:59 PM
Yes, I like it now, changed it to the color from the original, and then made it lighter

Thanks for your suggestions.
You really think they would accept it?
captured_serenity
Jan 21 2005, 02:28 PM
i like it but i see some sort of code stuff at the top? can you fix that?
avalon*
Jan 21 2005, 02:42 PM
QUOTE(SystemDamaged @ Jan 21 2005, 1:59 PM)
Yes, I like it now, changed it to the color from the original, and then made it lighter

Thanks for your suggestions.
You really think they would accept it?
i'd accept it; i'm on xanga staff =D
QUOTE(captured_serenity @ Jan 21 2005, 2:28 PM)
i like it but i see some sort of code stuff at the top? can you fix that?
i don't see code stuff..lol.
hi-C
Jan 21 2005, 02:43 PM
I'd accept it too. May I also suggest changing the color of the dates to better match the new color of the regular text?
SystemDamaged
Jan 21 2005, 03:23 PM
I don't see the code stuff too
Yes, I'll go change the blogheaders now.
Hmm, maybe I should submit it then

Thanks for suggesting that
snowymoon06
Jan 21 2005, 08:34 PM
i like the color a lot. you did an awesome job!
swtlildreamz
Jan 21 2005, 09:46 PM
awwe pretty layout :)
and as for the code..I click on your link once, it`s not there. Close, click on it again, &it`s there..lol. When the codes appear, it`s covering the top part of your layout. I don`t know why it`s playing hide-n-seek though?? ;\ Other than that, good job! =)
unrequited
Jan 21 2005, 10:00 PM
woah thats REALLY good...very original and everything ^^
juicyy_fruit
Jan 21 2005, 10:52 PM
very nice. i like the colors but the little text on the banner is kinda hard to read.
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