slowly i start to fade away
being unoticed , uncared for it hurts inside
the pain is unbearable, the feeling uncurable
when your emotions and your life start to collide

i ask myself over and over why i became like this
lonesome and hurt it scars within my heart
torn from inside me it breaks me apart

taken the blame for all the sh*t you put me through
puttin my name in shame after all i did for you
lost my sense of life, lost my sense of pride
the person you once knew had already died

you took me for granted, you used me as bait
i was your guinea pig locked in your crate
prisoned by your selfish greed
locked up by all your selfish needs

i look in the mirror hating what i see
a fool believing this is really me..


kinda awkward eh..?

not akward at all! I really like this because it's one of those I can relate to. It seems like it should be a song or something.

i love it. sounds great - good word choice. flows nicely too.

i love it's really good! keep it up

I thought it was amazing..not ackward. You captured some feelings in this poem that many ppl can't. I liked the first verse :

I can def see this as a song too.. great job!

heheh thnx alot for awhile i quitted writing and stopped the poems and the flow..this actually was my first poem in 4 months to me it looked awkward but im glad to see that many of yall appreciate this thnx =]