Wow, it's been a while.
Here's a little something I recently wrote. It's not finished though.

Script

He was the kind of guy to play out scenes from a movie; hell, to him, life was a movie. Following a script was much better than leaving life in fates' hands. Whether it was the drama that frequented him, or the web of sappy romances he found himself entangled in, he found himself playing director over the life he found dull and even meaningless. He knew he had no control over it, a loose grip on oil-slicked pre-destination. So he fought it, the only choice he saw fit, by forcing life to follow the book he proudly proclaimed author of.

He took note of this scene and thought to himself, "This is so cliché."

He chuckled under his breath, taking in another sip of coffee, allowing the warmth to linger upon his lips before the liquid cascaded over his tongue, bubbly; bitter. The chime of cup against saucer, the drop down to reality, the lift of eyes off individuality on mahogany table – he caught the blur of caffeinated Café rush hour, possible extras in this matinee of all matinees.

-Joe

I think that is awesome...you should def expand and continue with it..it sounds alot like somethan i would write....The first sentence is awesome, it captures you and draws you in..i especially liked

He chuckled under his breath, taking in another sip of coffee, allowing the warmth to linger upon his lips before the liquid cascaded over his tongue, bubbly; bitter. The chime of cup against saucer, the drop down to reality, the lift of eyes off individuality on mahogany table – he caught the blur of caffeinated Café rush hour, possible extras in this matinee of all matinees.

that part was great...you should def keep on writing and submitting..i dunno why more ppl didn't comment on this

Yeah, I wouldn't mind more comments, but it's no problem.
The only thing is that the old regular posters here didn't see that I posted something again. (I started that one sticky above this forum)
Thanks for your input, I've been meaning to finish it, but it might stretch on longer than I anticipated. Well, I'll post up the finished version when I'm through with it.

COMMENT INCOMING!

damn you are good....(mind taking my english essays?)

the only criticism i can say is ... nothing... its soo damn good

wow that sounds great so far. i can't wait to read the rest.

awsome, very well done.

Hrm, maaaaybe. I actually love doing essays.
Thanks for the comments guys, I'll be sure to try and finish it soon.

you better

*shakes fist*

haha... nah make it good