I don't know if you can tell
By my silencing spell
But I'm decaying away
From the thoughts that dwell
Inside this empy mind
It can't fade away with time
This depression is dark
And you're still guilty of your crime

But please don't tell the doctors
Becuase they've heard it all before
Just let her crash and burn
The attention only encourages her

And I'm sure you can tell

By the redness in my eyes
From the bruises on my thighs
The scars on my wrists
And my neverending sighs
That I'm not right now at all
Ha, there I go again;pretending that I'll fall
Who knows when I will finally fade away
You wanted me on my knees, so now I crawl

But please don't tell the doctors
Becuase they've heard it all before
Just let her crash and burn
The attention only encourages her

And I know you can tell
But please....don't tell.

i really like this one, but it ended kind of abruptly. Maybe add a line or two at the end, and repeat the I'm sure you can tell as the ending line. Otherwise amazing job, i love it!

Thank you! I'll do that in a few minutes. ^^

sounds like a hit. i like the message, too. kids are stupid.

Teehee. Thanks. And yes, we are.

ah much better. nice job

Whoot. Thank you once again.

well done. yeah i like the whole idea/message of it...good job.

Ohh i love it!! i like this part especially:

awesome job!

Thank you.

Oh man thats amazing, i feel like i'm reading my diary or somethan. I can totally relate...i think my fav part was..


yah, i loved it, it was amazing.....def can relate great job!

Wow. Thanks. I think that is the best compliment I have ever recieved.