Yea-yuh, I came back from the room
Yo, kid, you prepared fo yo doom?
On top of yo head, gon' be lil' moons
Dis Jackie rappin'
Now it's happenin'
The way you actin'
Nobody messes wit me,
The one and only,
The great one, Jackie

Jason, you prepared?
Now what, you scared?
You is a kangsta,
but you ain't close to a gangsta,
so you is a wanksta

I f**ked yo mom, bitch
She looked like a damn witch
So I went fo' da ditch,
and went to Abercrombie & Fitch

You is a gangsta, you wish
Yo ass smells like fish
Dicks are yo fav dish
You ain't no hustla,
You is no pimp,
You is no gangsta,
You just a d**k

look at jackie this fruit who claims shes juicy
she claims shes a gangster
but she stays home watching reruns of i love lucy
she said "i f**ked yo mom" but that would make her a dykee
but i swear she wore my d**k more than i wear my nikes

i dont hate on you cuz youre a girl
i hate on you cuz u think youre the queen of the world
and we all just your peasents
i got 2 middle fingers
those are your presents
your highness
yo smell so bad i swear youre messin up my sinus
when it comes to rappers im just the finest

Competitive styles influenced by garbage
Makes it hard for real skill to be acknowledged
Pay homage to talented swagger
Instead of wack emcees with flows with a stench like lager
Pay attention to each line that rhymes with punchlines
That you and yours attempt to quote and underline
But recognize its mine belonging to the D-O-N
I'm not Jesus but I'm still your beginning and end.

I know people have probly said this before me but..Damn man you suck buku ass. Don't even try. Good god.

im dope
like coke
that was cooked
in the kitchen

just to clarify, you can't freestyle with text, only on the mic. freestyling is when you rap off the top of your head.
I was gonna read all your guys' lyrics then i saw this was 4 pages long and i gave up lol. ill read all the ones after this though.


Yo, here I come; Jay's about to take over this game/
My name's not jason - I don't bring shame to my own name//1
So here I come so sick with the flow/
Spittin' metaphors while rippin' whores everywhere I go//2
And you know son I got the skills and the will/
I'm so ill that I knock ya bustas out like nyquil//3
And I'll kill any emcee that even thinks about steppin' to me/
Ya best be wearin' a vest G before you start testin' me//4
I'm army infantry and I'll put a bullet through your chest/
Like iraqi insurgents; I'll put a machette to your neck//5


bleh, I'm tired and don't feel like finishing lol. next time i write a full 8 bars

I'd go get tested if I were you.

^^ hahahaha

That was a nice rhyme too, but I just couldn't resist squeezing that joke in there.

^ haha thanks, it was a good joke =P

holy shit jason you just got owned. damn how could you bite off someone? especially WORD FOR WORD?

shorty so seductive dancin' on me...
the way that she move is making me horny
if i wake up next to her in the morning
ima turn over and tell her lets do it again..





..damn im loving that song right now... haha

aight G you got this all WRONG freestyling is when you rhyme freely off the top of your head.

When you rap its about something specific like money, cars, life etc....

I think you watch too much 106 and park

Oh here I go

I'm not a thief but my theme is a dream
to be the best mc on the scene
not for the cream, I ain't mean i'm nice
an Irish rhymin device
eat mc's like beans and rice
ya can't see me twice, I'm the one and only
if ya see someone like me the must be a phoney
like a city boys shirt in a country boutique - I'm so unique
no one can flow like keith, this ain't a
show of freaks so don't bring ya cameras
unless ya repeatadly sing 'Keithstradamus'
bandanas - I got none, thats not my style
a rhyme - I can drop one with the force of a shotgun it's vile
if ya know dont act in denial
cuz thats a cheaters thing to do - to refuse what is true
dont test me I'm not stupid, nor am I a gangsta
but this is still smooth shit that murderers can move with
ya got that? when i come in contact with combat
I'll spit shit and put Dublin on the Hip-Hop map
gotta stay focused and no go off track
if I fail to prevail I'll pop back
d'ont think it's an act, adapt the fact
I don't interact with people who kiss asses perhaps it's,
cuz my vision is different
when I see a trendy mc I know I'm not equivalent
time fo you to know what
I'm all about and how when I start I wont stop
like an uncontrolled robot,
I'm so hot

everyone pre writes.. nobody really freestyles anymore

Check my sig, my cousin freestyled that shit on the phone yesterday, he's 13.

so is this even a competition anymore? what is this lol

Watch these suckers step up and get done//
You wouldn't know talent if you were Elvis's son//
My peoples seek lyrical justice when I Bust this//
If you were MC Hammer, you still couldn't touch this//
I open up the doors for verbal communication//
But if we can't agree, then who will be the one to show dedication//
I make provisions for lost ones who have no hope//
Im climbing up the peak trying not to fall off the slope//
These people take life as one big joke//
Until they staring down a barrel of a gun about to get smoked//
I must profess in this profession my flow is prodigious//
Its a few soldiers in this world, the rest are just bitches//
Just to set the situation correct,
I mean that word out of no harm and no disrespect//
Its just in turbulent times you can't frantic and fret ,
Especially when your the one placing the highest bet//
Im able to bounce back and show great resilience//
Only oustanding achievements will show your brilliance//

I'm a fly chick and i rap day or night
but if you said i wasn't ghetto than you probably are right//
I can drive in the car and park where I like
Cause everyone loves me cause my spinners are tight//
I'm so awful, but I'm like the suburban queen
In my mom's navigator and a rented limosine//
I'm so bad at rapping, but I respect Eminem
Even though I don't really even listen to him...
and I'm so freakin pale and I look so white
That when I'm chilling in the club people use me as a light//

I don't care about drugs- I don't do them "just for fun"
And I don't talk like it's cool to shoot people with a gun
And If you tell me I'm an idiot and really don't know rap
I don't care, violence is wrong; Your ignorance is Cr*p.

***
<33 you guys. That's my two cents. Yeah I know i insulted myself, but really I have a nickname---the girl that I should NEVER rap. EVER.

Lmfao, that made me laugh out loud. I'm so weird.

Edit//

I rock peas on my head, but don't call me a peahead,
I got bees on my head, but don't call me a beehead,
I got Bruce Lees on my head, but don't call me a Leehead,
Now please excuse me, I gotta get my tree fed.

- Andy Milonakis

that was pretty dope. some nice multis and metas. rhyme structure was straight.

Hold up, let me bring back this topic//
Half these Cbers talk but wont pop it//


//

The kid got flow for sho, I challenge suckas like this math//
Fast as lightning, Im enlightened, I took myself down a righteous path//
The gemini, I look down on you Im so high//
Never shy, I move you just like a driveby//
You know the name man, bullets aren't apart of my game plan//
Wordplay like hangman, the one that put these cats to shame man//
THe kid is a big tymer, Let me give you a reminder//
My flow is unforgetful to a person with alzheimer's//

yo, i come from New Zealand if you know what i'm feeling,
just because i'm different some people dont consider it,
yea, just cause i'm a Maori, people acting all sorry, na not really, not even jokingly,
every ones all good to every body,
every one acting all nice to any body,
this is the end of my rap and thats a fact.

YEEAA, nah jokes

yo really dat true, i didn't even know that, but now i do, so thank you,
i didn't even know the difference between freestyling and raping, but now i do and i can go tell all my best friends,
im raping right now off the top of my head, and saying any word that comes to head,
what do ya think is it alright or is this up tight.

wow can someone please tell me who gravedigged this topic?
Stick to talking in the "lounge" cause when it comes to rap just stop it
I've been in a hiatus from the rap game
Seems like noone missed me what a shame.

1.2.3 my name is Timbzy dont f*ck with me i am well nown in torqey so dont f*ck with my family i will shot you so dont ever f*ck with me

1.2.3 My second name is Timbzy so dont f*ck with me or i will get my hole family or Barton crew or alkum crew i will get my arover i think i am supernover so dont f*ck with me or Anthony on the baet line i will break your back any day of the week.

stack em or rack em whatever it is you gots to pack em
when niggas start starin then with your walk thats how you cap em
real cool so close to being a fool but thas the thin line you walk, f*ck em
to be real there's never ever real contempt in this life ever
and real true joy comes from being contempt for the next life forever ever for ever ever for ever ever for ever ever (kanyewest/outkast foreverever)

forever ever is how you keep going on
mans step and cause is to just keep on
step by step is how you walk and how you progress through the strife o life
just keep going on
just keep going on
land o lakes and i really can't believe it's not butter