HURT ME ONE LAST TIME
I’ve lost count of the knives you left in my back
Because my abacus only goes to one hundred
But I think there’s room for one more
So, please
Hurt me one last time
So I can die once and for all
Just hurt me one last time
So I can die once and for all
I’ve lost track of how many hours you’ve left me here
Hanging from this noose
Because my calendar only measures one year
So, please
Hurt me one last time
So I can die once and for all
I’ll sleep sound in my gave
I’d like to thank you for digging it for me
I wouldn’t have loved you unless
I wanted you to kill me
I wouldn’t have opened up unless
I wanted you to steal from me
Love is a sward
You live by it, you die by it
Unfortunately
It’s the sweetest blade to ever pierce my skin
One more knife in my back
One more day on the noose
Promise you’ll let me die for once
And for all
Pretty please
Hurt me one last time
So I can die once and for all
Hurt me one last time
So I can die once and for all
Hurt me one last time
Hurt me one last time
Hurt me, damn it
For one last f**king time
Full Version: hurt me one last time
Nice.
I like this one a lot.
"One more knife in my back
One more day on the noose
Promise you’ll let me die for once
And for all
Pretty please"
^ I love that part.
I just.. love it.
Great job, as always!
I like this one a lot.
"One more knife in my back
One more day on the noose
Promise you’ll let me die for once
And for all
Pretty please"
^ I love that part.
I just.. love it.
Great job, as always!
you write a lot of really good poems. and this one is really great too.
I wouldn’t have loved you unless
I wanted you to kill me
I wouldn’t have opened up unless
I wanted you to steal from me
Love is a sward
You live by it, you die by it
Unfortunately
It’s the sweetest blade to ever pierce my skin
i like that part. good work!
I wouldn’t have loved you unless
I wanted you to kill me
I wouldn’t have opened up unless
I wanted you to steal from me
Love is a sward
You live by it, you die by it
Unfortunately
It’s the sweetest blade to ever pierce my skin
i like that part. good work!
very nice. i quite like it. the feeling put into it is great. good job. 
Ahh. Is this about someone I know? 
It reminds me of how it was with Dave...
It reminds me of how it was with Dave...
QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jan 8 2005, 2:19 AM)
I’ve lost count of the knives you left in my back
Because my abacus only goes to one hundred
But I think there’s room for one more
Because my abacus only goes to one hundred
But I think there’s room for one more
Marry me now.
That's my favorite part from there. Would you mind if I used that to make a graphic? I really like that quote. ^^
That was so awesome. I already told you everything else I had to say.
QUOTE(TreesTurnMeOn @ Jan 9 2005, 1:07 PM)
Marry me now.
That's my favorite part from there. Would you mind if I used that to make a graphic? I really like that quote. ^^
That was so awesome. I already told you everything else I had to say.
That's my favorite part from there. Would you mind if I used that to make a graphic? I really like that quote. ^^
That was so awesome. I already told you everything else I had to say.
hehe. okay. i'll go get the ring
and, sure, you can use it for a graphic
QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jan 9 2005, 1:37 PM)
hehe. okay. i'll go get the ring
and, sure, you can use it for a graphic
and, sure, you can use it for a graphic
Whoot!
Thanks..I'm working on it right now. ^^
When I read all of your lyrics.
It sounded like a hard rock metal type of song. I guess that's how you wanted it to be. But anyways it's okay. I'll say 8 out of 10. Because it's 8 out of 10 is because I didn't like when you mentioned the knife part, sounds too violence, eh? But the rest --- it was good. Some art and emotions you did hehe.
It sounded like a hard rock metal type of song. I guess that's how you wanted it to be. But anyways it's okay. I'll say 8 out of 10. Because it's 8 out of 10 is because I didn't like when you mentioned the knife part, sounds too violence, eh? But the rest --- it was good. Some art and emotions you did hehe.
WOW... =P
wow i loveee your work. it sounds soo wow. lols
It sounds like a song. Lol nice job! 
LOL, i like the last sentence.
thats deep and u know what i like i like so keepin doin them poems
signed,
JOhn
signed,
JOhn
Really great poem, John. I really like this one. *clap clap clap*
That's really good (as always) LunchboxXx but a little creepy lol.
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