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RavedandConfused
Tongue Piercing Haiku:


silver on my tongue
sticking out of my small mouth
oh how i love you.
madpimp
a word of warning
don't lick electric sockets
they'll really shock you


no. really. they will. doubly, too because of that conductor in the middle of your tongue.
madpimp
oh yeah. i forgot to say.... zero eprops!
wind&fire
why arent i laughing?
yummy_delight
and this is funny... how?
madpimp
QUOTE(AzNbUbZ @ Jan 7 2005, 6:31 AM)
why arent i laughing?
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QUOTE(yummy_delight @ Jan 7 2005, 6:28 PM)
and this is funny... how?
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You don't enjoy this most likely because you are too uneducated / uncultured / unworldly to understand the True Art [yes. capital T capital A] behind the poetry style called the haiku.

BIATCH!
wind&fire
^ oh poor girl...

here have some riddlin...

yet you dont seem to appeciate it yourself as you gave zero eprops when you so blatantly double posted miss 104 posts


no?!?! huh.gif biznitch?....
miss barnes
ohhh..its a haiku..i know what that is... 5 syllables then 7 then 5 again...wow..i remember!!
inthemudhole
..Nice.. picture.. O_o
angel-roh
ROFL you're hilarious. You must be that BORED lol















Dude you have a long tongue mellow.gif
tooeffingcrazy
Agreed^. Hmm.. what a nice haiku -.-
azn_r4pf4n
what the heck? haha, "oh how i love you." ? lolz.
Azarel
Um. Cute? blink.gif
KissMe2408
lol...Very interesting...nice picture
Not the best Haiku...and i think you offended some people up there haha. lol, but very nice try happy.gif
Kathleen
How could he have offended some people? blink.gif And I thought it was funny, but found the second post even funnier. laugh.gif
iiiiiiiYON
INTERESTING
imadorkabledxd
QUOTE(madpimp @ Jan 7 2005, 5:00 AM)
a word of warning
don't lick electric sockets
they'll really shock you
no. really. they will. doubly, too because of that conductor in the middle of your tongue.
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hahahah
cheri_pi
QUOTE(Kathleen @ Jan 16 2005, 2:35 PM)
And I thought it was funny, but found the second post even funnier. laugh.gif
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couldn't have said it better. it wasn't that interesting of a post, but i cracked up when i read the first reply. haha, well done to YOU, madpimp. biggrin.gif cool.gif
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