this is a poem thingy i wrote at like sometime bettween 11-12 pm. i don't remember. but anyways....please comment and i hope you like it. if not say what i can do to make it better....

SHE IS...
she is the badass girl
the one with a million piercings
with too many boyfriends to count
who sneaks out past cerfew(sp?)
and always starts the fights

she is the wild child
the one nobody can tame
with so many issues she drove the school therapist insane
who goes to the crazy place every so often
and doesn't give a f*** what anybody says

she's the lonely girl
the one nobody understands
with no clue what she wants in life
who has no clue who her father's f***ing tonight

she's the unknown girl
the one nobody knows but always seems to judge
with a few dark secrets
who keeps everybody guessing
and all she really wants...is somebody to notice her

the 3rd verse is pretty sad..
nice poem. keep it up.

ooh very niice my favorite stanza would have to be the 3rd [:

thank you

Ooh, that's nice. =)
Yeah, I like the 3rd stanza, as well.

Nice job! :D

why thank you