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not_your_average
OK, this is a b-day poem for my sister, even though it was on the 5th. tongue.gif

But anyways, here it is.

The Day

Today is the day,
Your birthday, YAY!
But before that day,
I have something to say.

Make it fun, make it lively,
Make it great, make it exciting.
Make it memorable most of all,
Make it amazing, wherever you are.

Today is a special day,
Where we get along, always.
So, please, remember this,
I love you, dear sis!

I thought the ending was kinda corny, but please, post for some feedback!
Ekay
I like it. It's very lively. Good Job thumbsup.gif
not_your_average
happy.gif thanks!
yoshiyoshi
aww, that is sweet xD
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