Okies everyone my first poem in this place hope you like:

Sent from above

I can still feel that warm embrace
That warm kiss you left on my face
All I did was give youallmy love
All I knew was that you were sent from above
You know I'll never let you down
Because I'll always be around
I can't belive that we are done
I can't belive our love is gone
My feeling still for you are here
I always keep them near
You will always be my first love
Just because you were sent from above

Well I hope you like it. Advice would help if you don't like it. i'll try and see if I can put up some more! Heh! Oh yeh that poem are for people that lost there first love!

thats really good.....nice job

that is good

thanks a bunch! here's another one! lolz ! im gonna put the firstpoem i ever wrote in here go there...

Hate and Love
I hate you
I love you
I have both feelings for you
at the same time...
I hate the wat you act like a jerk
but I love the way you are...
I love the way I love you
but I hate the way I hate you
I love the way we still see each other everyday
but I hate the way we're not together
Love and hate are strong feelings
Do you feel the same as I do?
I'm so in love with you
but I really hate you

that poem was to my first boyfriend. he and i went on and off. i hope you get the poem!