The Bloody Wrists Society

Welcome to,
The so-called "cult,"
The Bloody Wrists Society.

Here we have,
The anti-Christs,
Depressed and very angry.

An old, old secret,
Since 1600,
Kept by Salem's witches.

The blades, the knives,
Under lock & key,
That is where we keep them.

Oh, you want be?
Just like me?
A leader of the society?

Ok, I say,
First, clean the blades,
Here's the key, just from me.

You missed a spot,
My little minion,
Please start over, for my sake.

Yeah.. kinda weird, but please reply!

Interesting. I liked where you were going with with the "bloody wrists society" but you kinda went off topic...I don't know, but keep workin on it..you're doing good

^ Agreed.
I like it, but yeah.. you did get a bit off-subject, but that's okay.
I like the title. :D

yeah what that person said. awesome title though

Yeah, thanks for the feedback, though!

i like it but you didnt end it, it just stopped in what seemed like the middle of it. great job though. i love the title.

two words: super duper

hehe. it looks like you intended to add more to it, though. kinda ended at a cliff hanger, ya know?

Yes you kind of got off the main topic but the rest was still related, and it was good. Good job, I hope I'll see more writing from you. ;D

i love it

yea it's good, but it did get off topic =)