Yeah, it's me again. I wrote another one while I was at my friends house. I got the urge while watching Degrassi of all shows. Anyway, I don't have a title for this one either. Give me some feedback please and tell me the truth. Thanks.

Ticking;half past midnight
Lieing in the bed
Gun sitting along side
Aiming at the head

Thoughts running around
Friendships breaking apart
Needles working furiously
Mending this broken heart

Yelling for compassion
Jumping in mid-air
Longing for something to hold
Asking anyone to care

Wishing for a miracle
Punching at the wall
Begging for forgiveness
Praying not to fall

Replaying words once said
Screaming in misery and woe
Cringing at my thoughts
Pleading not to go

Fading into nothing
Drifting through the clouds
Wondering why it hapened
Hoping that you're proud

Ticking;half past midnight
Lieing lifeless on the floor
Bullets scattered around a body
Of a girl who suffers no more...




Eh..I know it sucks. Just need some feedback though.

I like it. I especially like the "Punching at the wall". I don't know why..but that's my favorite line. Well done.

i like the laste stanza. good rhyming(sp?)

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