this is a poem i wrote last year and yeah i know it kinda sucks but tell me what you think anyways alright? leave suggestions to okay? help me make it better!

IM NOT PERFECT...SORRY
nobody is perfect
those are the words i recall you telling me
now you torment me
you take back all the good things you said
the truths you once told are now lies
i don'tknow why you'd do this to me
but i guess there is never a reason
you say now that i should be perfect
or i will never be accepted
well that's not what you told me then
but i guess now is what really matters
i stay for mom's sake
mom told me what he did to you
i will never do that to my children
i promise you that
i told you that then
now it is now
and you are dying
mom made me visit you
i will never forget what you did
i hate you more then anything else
but in the last minutes of your life i say...
i'm sorry i wasn't perfect

isn't there a song about this that the radio stations won't stop playing? if you are serious about this poem you should probably rewrite it a few times to make it different from the one on the radio. from 1-10 i give it a 3.

yeah i know what your talking about and i think i know how to improve it so once again thank you for your imput!

Ones on the radio? Ahh, Im soo confused LoL

NE ways, I like it, just tweek it alittle and it will be really good.

thank you

mad props on the poem dude. has a good flow to it. and a powerful meaning. =)

umm yeah kinda weird........................ it's not a good poem for a title like "im not perfect"........need a new title, but the rest...um was ok.

i got kinda confused in the middle. but good job.

thank you for your comment