ryfitaDF
Dec 18 2004, 10:52 PM
a break-up song. enjoy.
IMMATURE, CHILDISH, FICKLE WENCH
The only thing I regret
Was caring so much
For am IMMATURE, CHILDISH
FICKLE WENCH LIKE YOU!
I treated you
Like a goddess
I gave you gold
You gave me shit
You broke my heart
I dealt with it
Your negligence
Made me perfect!
With every passing day
I question what I ever saw
I am amazed
It could ever last this long
Won’t put up with anymore
Of your wrong doing
i know i'm worthless
But you’re still not good enough for me
I pledged my love
You played your games
I kept you warm
You left me in the rain
You told me lies
I told nothing but truth
Proof positive
I am too good for you
With every passing day
I question what I ever saw
I am amazed
It could ever last this long
Won’t put up with anymore
Of your wrong doing
i know i'm worthless
But you’re still not good enough for me
The only thing I regret
Was caring so much
For am IMMATURE, CHILDISH
FICKLE WENCH LIKE YOU!
Reject me now
Commence the dup
Think about it
Grow the f**k up!
Watching you fall
Into your slump
Remember me
And how you f**ked up
With every passing day
I question what I ever saw
I am amazed
It could ever last this long
Won’t put up with anymore
Of your wrong doing
I know i'm worthless
But you’re still not good enough for me
The only thing I regret
Was caring so much
For am IMMATURE, CHILDISH
FICKLE WENCH LIKE YOU!
Kathleen
Dec 18 2004, 10:59 PM
Haha. 'Fickle wench' describes her well.
Good job, Lunchbox. As always.
lovescream
Dec 18 2004, 11:28 PM
What in the world is a "Fickle wench"?
and.. you must be heartbroken, huh?
TreesTurnMeOn
Dec 18 2004, 11:36 PM
Wow. No idea what a 'fickle winch' is...but that is an amazing poem. I really like it. It is funny yet it makes a point. Good job.
ryfitaDF
Dec 18 2004, 11:54 PM
fickle- undecidable. doesn't know what he/she wants.
wench- derogitory term for a female, such as "bitch"
smthngcrprategrl34
Dec 20 2004, 04:06 PM
fickle wench...sounds interesting. good poem though!
ApocalypseAelis
Dec 21 2004, 12:51 AM
Nice poem! Really...hateful. I love it!
I know what it means, but somehow fickle wench makes me think of different brands of pickles...
sikdragon
Dec 21 2004, 03:21 AM
that's so true, but it reminds me of that song by puddle of mud that sounds like nirvana. She f**king Hates me.
Met a girl, thought she was grand
fell in love, found out first hand
went well, for a week or two
then it all, came unglued
you get the picture
from 1-10 N/A
demolished
Dec 21 2004, 07:06 PM
haha, thats hilarouis, nice poem ! keep it up !
Sa-Chan
Dec 22 2004, 02:11 PM
I honestly loved it. Fickle wench.
QUOTE
Reject me now
Commence the dup
Think about it
Grow the f**k up!
Watching you fall
Into your slump
Remember me
And how you f**ked up
That's my favorite part.
not_your_average
Dec 23 2004, 04:34 PM
That's cool, nice "rant" feel to it.
It weirdly sounds like a Shel Silverstein poem to me, though...
Could be the title.
wind&fire
Dec 23 2004, 08:54 PM
right wheres that whore.. lets bitch slap her...
inthemudhole
Dec 24 2004, 02:35 AM
Wow, this is awesome.. as always. =]
Great job, Lunchbox. :]
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