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ryfitaDF
a break-up song. enjoy.

IMMATURE, CHILDISH, FICKLE WENCH
The only thing I regret
Was caring so much
For am IMMATURE, CHILDISH
FICKLE WENCH LIKE YOU!

I treated you
Like a goddess
I gave you gold
You gave me shit
You broke my heart
I dealt with it
Your negligence
Made me perfect!

With every passing day
I question what I ever saw
I am amazed
It could ever last this long
Won’t put up with anymore
Of your wrong doing
i know i'm worthless
But you’re still not good enough for me

I pledged my love
You played your games
I kept you warm
You left me in the rain
You told me lies
I told nothing but truth
Proof positive
I am too good for you

With every passing day
I question what I ever saw
I am amazed
It could ever last this long
Won’t put up with anymore
Of your wrong doing
i know i'm worthless
But you’re still not good enough for me

The only thing I regret
Was caring so much
For am IMMATURE, CHILDISH
FICKLE WENCH LIKE YOU!

Reject me now
Commence the dup
Think about it
Grow the f**k up!
Watching you fall
Into your slump
Remember me
And how you f**ked up

With every passing day
I question what I ever saw
I am amazed
It could ever last this long
Won’t put up with anymore
Of your wrong doing
I know i'm worthless
But you’re still not good enough for me

The only thing I regret
Was caring so much
For am IMMATURE, CHILDISH
FICKLE WENCH LIKE YOU!
Kathleen
Haha. 'Fickle wench' describes her well. whistling.gif Good job, Lunchbox. As always. happy.gif
lovescream
What in the world is a "Fickle wench"?
and.. you must be heartbroken, huh?
TreesTurnMeOn
Wow. No idea what a 'fickle winch' is...but that is an amazing poem. I really like it. It is funny yet it makes a point. Good job.
ryfitaDF
fickle- undecidable. doesn't know what he/she wants.

wench- derogitory term for a female, such as "bitch"
smthngcrprategrl34
fickle wench...sounds interesting. good poem though!
ApocalypseAelis
Nice poem! Really...hateful. I love it!

I know what it means, but somehow fickle wench makes me think of different brands of pickles... mellow.gif
sikdragon
that's so true, but it reminds me of that song by puddle of mud that sounds like nirvana. She f**king Hates me.

Met a girl, thought she was grand
fell in love, found out first hand
went well, for a week or two
then it all, came unglued


you get the picture

from 1-10 N/A
demolished
haha, thats hilarouis, nice poem ! keep it up ! biggrin.gif
Sa-Chan
I honestly loved it. Fickle wench.

QUOTE
Reject me now
Commence the dup
Think about it
Grow the f**k up!
Watching you fall
Into your slump
Remember me
And how you f**ked up


That's my favorite part.
not_your_average
That's cool, nice "rant" feel to it. happy.gif It weirdly sounds like a Shel Silverstein poem to me, though... blink.gif Could be the title.
wind&fire
right wheres that whore.. lets bitch slap her...
inthemudhole
Wow, this is awesome.. as always. =]
Great job, Lunchbox. :]
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