its painful to watch someone die
falling on my knees, unstoppable tears stream down my eyes
the pain so strong it wont let me go
it stays within me, a burden saying no
following me everywhere, haunting in my dreams
my greatest fear watching as i run and scream
praying to god, wishing on a star
to let me be free and get rid of this scar
waiting untill my day comes, untill im free
it stays right here, right next to me

lol hope yall like this..!!

wow is pain really next to you? heh my pains always follow me wherever i go. it's bad and not fun T__T;; this poem is SO ME. heh nice poem. you did a really good job to it. is your mood fill with pain? is that why you posted a pain topic? heh anyways yeah it was good, nice job.

i like the poem. i feel like i understand it a lot. yeah good job!

I really like it.
Especially the rhyming part. It has a rhythmitic beat to it, which I like.

yeh thnx for all the comments hmm i am in actual pain right now...=( my dads in the hospital and it almost x mas..they told me hes dying..but im trying not think of it and just forget about it and have a good x mas

very touching. especially after my g-pa died two days ago!

believe it or not slow and painful is easier to accept than a sudden heart attack or a murder. Pain and death are usually synonymous. however loss and the phantom feeling of mourning shouldnt last longer than the consequence. There is a season for it and yet another for joy that comes after it. Happiness and youth are fleeting so savor them with the silver line in the good and the bad times. The rhyme scheme is a bit sketchy and lost.

from 1-10 i give it a 4

that's my fave line. love the emotion in that poem. you should submit your stuff to poetry.com. they give money for poems.