IF I SHOULD DIE BEFORE I WAKE

if i should die before i wake

there is soemthing i'd like to know

do you love me?

or were those words you said just a lie?

i feel your soft lips touch mine

and i want to know this is real

that everythings gonna be okay

that you will never leave me

cuz i don't wanna let you go

i thought nobody would ever love me

but you proved me wrong

you said i was special, and that i'd always be somebody to you

so please tell me that everything we have is real

that is the only think i'd like to know

if i should die before i wake

so this poem is actually saying that you want to know if that person really loved you or was he just playing around with your love life...but the only thing i don't really get is the part when you said "if i should die before i wake" so do you basically meant by not hearing what your lover says because you know he really faked out your love with him? if im wrong, eck help me out then?

you have the first part right the "if i die before i wake" thing that's like i want to know how you really feel and like you don't know really if your gonna live or not cuz anything can happen to you so the person's saying tell me now cuz i might not live long enough for you to tell me later. make sence?

I like your screename and sig!

I really like the "If I should die before I wake" part starting and ending the poem. It just...it's a good catch to it, of course I also love the idea of the whole thing. Was it written for someone in particular, I wonder?

thank you swtxcatastrophe i like your screen name too! it wasn't when i wrote it i wrote it just because...but now sorta kinda...

nice poemmm reminds me of my old days...

i see...well thank you for the comment!

one word, cliche. It intrigued me at first but it was just the same thing as billions of other poems. Make it more real, make it intense. Paint the picture of the night. Place the feeling that you wanna make thing right before you die.

from 1-10 i give it a 2

i see....thank you very much for your input