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PingPong
well this is a poem i wrote... cuz.. a friend told me to write about it.. n so i did....

it kinda has my feelings in it as well.. n kinda runs in my life.. wit my ex.. but its not all true.. heh =/
anyways.here goes

wow..
been a while since we talked
been while since we fought...
i remember the first time we met
I remember how it was set
We yelled at eachother
never knowing one another..

all we do is just yell at eachother
we never really cared about eachother
time goes by
each day i cry
I think about the past...
i dont know why it just happened so fast...
But now i know...
So here, ill let it flow...

Baby im sry for what i did
i was stupid for acting like a kid
dont know wat happen to us
dont even wanna cuss...
So can we start over...

I just wanna say this to you
and this is all true
so here me out.. this is for you
Baby.. i love you....

-Vincent Huynh Wynn

tell me wat u guys think..

Thanks
Kathleen
Is this true? Haha. Usually when I show people I dislike them, I never look back and neither do they. pinch.gif Nonetheless, it's good.
PingPong
well.. iono if i love her... anymore.. heh cuz of wat she did to me... n stuff.. =/
angel-roh
yelling and screaming---one word...ouch.

anyways your poem sounded like "right here with me" by JS. it's a song just to let you know that. but sort of different cause they dont mention the yellin' and screaming lol but anyways nice poem =] wait you love her but you dont know you love her? O_O;;;;;;;;;;;
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