A broken heart,
Whispering from it's dying yell.

A trapped soul,
laying in it's cage for all eternal hell.

A trembling hand,
Crying out for it's remorse and sorrow.

A desperate tear,
Falling down it's path to follow.

A lost crow,
Who had learned to become a dove.

A wilting rose,
To be shown to a true lost love...
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Ehh.. I wrote this a long time ago. I broke up with my first girlfriend. I was stupid back then. She is still hot though. I was an over dramatic kid then.
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Oh fallen angel,
Take me on your torn and battered wings.

Oh mortal human,
Take me to your home that sings.

Oh darkened demon,
Take me from your pit that death it brings.
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Don't ask.


I will post more when I get the rest back from my friend. He wanted to look through them, and maybe use some as lyrics.

hey, it's good. getting your heart broken sucks ass. we're all dramatic. and it leads to great poetry and junk. =]

Thats really great work, but Jesus, it's depressing.

wow that's cute. it's like describing its one word to a meaningful word^^;; and the rest is like bad to the goods^^;; great job!