The poem's in my signature, but I'm posting it anyway...what do you think?

I'm the shadow from the corner of your eye
The voice that hisses through your head
The cold that invades your veins
The shiver in the skin you'll never shed

Sometimes, you'll perceive a whisper
No one else can hear
Or mayhap see a silhouette
That only you shall fear

There'll always be a fragile wind
To play around your throat
There'll always be a poisoned haze
That around your eye shall float.

The fact is, I'll be here forever
Within your very heart
Eating away at your frightened soul
And tearing your mind apart.

Ooh dark and gloomy. Just how I like 'em. It matches your banner so well. I love it. *High five*

^ like kathleen say. "dark and gloomy" the last verse sounds scary but this poem reminded me of "always" by blink 182 lol. im not saying you copied it just reminds me

Thank you! But just so you know, I've never heard that song "Always" by blink 182...

awesomeness. it's dark and gloomyish...i like it

Wow. I really really like that. Very VERY good job.

Thank you!

sounds like a whispered lie to keep one hopeless. Like it has control of you. well remember the past is past and regrets should never last longer than their consequence.
1-10 i give it a 5

It just didn't speak to me. I mean yeah it's well written, but a poem needs to be more than that. good job.