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mizzlem0nade
blech, poetry class at school. gave it my best shot, yet it's still odd. well here it is:

Differences and similarities
but really we're all the same
deep down in our hearts
is the part we have to blame

Feelings getting all messed up
under control, all thought out
wish i knew what was going on
or what this really was about

we regret it, i know
but what can we do
this world is tumbled and scattered
there's no peace between me and you

our differences and similarities
are really all the same
because deep down in our hearts
is the part we have to blame

pinch.gif ech, short i know
Ekay
It's not short. There's a certain somethin` about this poem I quite can't figure out..it's a good thing tho. But anyways keep it up and keep postin` `em up _smile.gif
so0o_contagious
this ones good. i like. lol.
angel-roh
sounds like a movie saying that you cant turn back from all those scattered memories. heh good try for a first try ;)
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