Confusion.
Another state of mind.
Suffocation, aggravation,
Hatred dwells inside.
Even with the eyes shut,
I can feel the blood rush.
The adrenaline doesn't stop rising,
Making it hard for the hate that I'm hiding.
This state of mind,
Out of control.
What do I find?
There's nowhere to go.
Because I can't even talk to you.
I can't even speak with you.
Nothing that you can do.
Shut off in my own world.
Leaving all else behind.
I'm trapped in another state of mind.
All I do is bleed.
You can't reach me.
You can't even see me.
Even though you try,
You don't understand
Your first choice is die
When you're in this state of mind.

Wow, I like that. Jesus, I can already hear music to go along with that. I mean, it may not be a song, but I can just hear the music for it. Kicks ass.

yeah that is really good!and it does kinda sound like a song even if that's not what it's meant to be.

you know this is actually a good poem that it would be wonderful to fit as a lyric^^