Boy haven't submitted anything here in a while..Well here goes..Tell me what you think

I know where my heart belongs
And it belongs with you
I have a sense of right and wrong
This feeling I have for you
I know has been right all along
Yet, I’ve never noticed up till now that
Your smile, beauty, grace and attitude
Is not everything that I should look at
Since beauty is only skin deep, I only look within
Past your façade, make-up, sin and all of that
When I’m with you I’m lost for words, so where can I begin
I normally try to make you laugh, so you don’t catch onto my veneer
Even though I know I shouldn’t be deceiving you
If you should ever find out, I’d want to disappear
If anyone were to tell you, I’d like you to know that my feelings for you are eternally true


~Nguyen

that's awesome! i can kinda relate to it too. awesome job!

Why thank you

aww that's very cute!! very touching words you typed down! hehe it's so me and my love life right now haha

You write good poems.

But this one is heart-touching..

Thanks!! I really appreciate the feedback!

That's really sweet. It kind of makes me sad. Reminds of something my boyfriend once wrote. You're really good. Love the word veneer.

It makes you sad?? Well Just cheer up okay?? Because I don't like seeing sad girls.