a few short poems i wrote during math class...

poem 1

i sit here and cry
and through my tears i see the picture forming on my skin
never enough to die
but enough to hurt

poem2
the artist is drawing
in this drawing you can see the sadness
and feel the pain
the paint is red
and the paper is white
the drawing is so real
it's painful to see it

poem3
staring at the setting sun
i find no reason to come back again
everything is falling fast
by the time it takes to let go im already hurt again
there is no faith
no chance
all hope is lost
staring at the setting sun
i find no reason to come back again
the razors set apon my wrist ready to make its mark
the damage's done and i can't go back
the metal sinks into my skin
there's no way i'm going back
there's no reason to come back again
im staring at the setting sun and soon all i will see is night

Those are pretty good poems, especially if your sitting there in the middle of math class. lol. Try to work off those poems now, it's a good start, but spend some more time with the words, and try things that you usually would be afraid to express...they are good tho :)

thanx! ill work on 'em

i like the poem 3 better hehe.. cause it was more understanding and i got to know what you meant, but the rest--- i was lost

yeah...i think i kno what you mean but thanks for the comment!